Contributed by: Sai Ravi Krishna Eranki
Jeevitham neerpina paataalu (Part-1) ni miss ayina vallu, kindha unna link dwara chadavagalaru.. Mana katha lo pratyekatha entantee mundugaa ye part chadivinaa, story kii sync lone untaaru… Jeevitham Neerpina Paataalu part – 1
College first day…
Hadavidii gaa Deepu tiptop gaa ready ayyi digulu gaa kurchunnadu…
Amma : Emaindii raa alaa unnav..??
Deepu : Chudu maa..Naaku manchi college loo seat vacchindanii ninna night maa friends tho party cheskodaanikii vellii tananii marchipoyanani Priya naa meeda aligindii..Tanante naaku pranam anii enni sarlu cheppano..
Amma : Sarigga chudu raa ikkade ekkado petti marchipoyi untav..
Eepatikii meeku ardam ayipoye untundi..Manodikii papam chinnappati nunchi girlfriends leka, vaadi phone ki Priya ani peru petti girlfriend laaga chuskuntunnadu..Pacchiga cheppalante manalo chala mandi laage Deepu kudaa “A1 grade PURE SINGLE”…Podunna late ga levadam, Amma balavantham cheste tiffin, snanam cheyyadam, madyanam cricket aadadam, sayantram friends tho kalisii cinema, ratri oka rendu videolu idii selavullo Deepu timetable..Cheppadam marchipoyaanandii, manodiki mandu, cigarette lanti alavatlu kuda levu…
Kathalokii vaccheddam. Baaga vethakaga Priya( phone) dorikindi.. Ventane college kii parigetthadu.. College first day…Full hadavidi gaa undhi.. college first day ante telusuga mana abbailu, pushkarallo tappipoyina pillalu amma,nannala kosam vethikinattu..oo tega vethikestaaru andamaina ammayila kosam…Valla college rules prakaram first day ammayilu saree kattukoni, abbayilu traditional dress veskoni ravali…Manodu kuda valla batch tho paatu oka pittagoda meeda kurchuni sollestunnadu…Inthalopu evaro pilichinattu anipiste road vaipuki chusadu…
Nadi nishidi loo paravalistunna godariki vennela cheera kattinattu, oka ammayi (Divya) saree kattukoni andamga mustabayyi nadustu vastondi..Deepu andarinii chusinatte netranandam kosam aa ammayini koddisepu chusadu. Tarawata function ayyindi..Classes kuda start ayyayi..
As usual ga Deepu valla class ee aa Divya di kuda. Andarilaagane baaga matladukunnaru. As usual ga Deepu kii Divya ante prema kaligindi. Final year ending loo okka roju Deepu dairyam chesi aa Divya daggaraku velli,
“Naa Priya naatho matladadam maanesindi..”
Divya : “Endukalaa..??”
Deepu : “Adi matram em chestundi le, tana place ni nuvvu teeseskunnavani telisipoyindi”
Divya ki Deepu em cheppalanukunnado ardam ayipoyindii, tanaki kuda Deepu ante istam undadam valla Deepu ki confidence iddam anukoni, ennallanuncho wait chesina moment vacchinanduku lopala chaala aananda padutu, bayatiki chinnaga siggu padutu Deepu kii eye contact icchindi…
Deepukii aa eye contact thone mottam ardamaipoyindi..Nijame kada ee prapancham loo ammayi kallani, avi convey chese feelings nii entha mandi kavulu varninchina takkuve kada..Deepu propose cheyyadam, tanu yes cheppadam rendu jarigipoyaayi..okkasari love proposal, Acceptance rendu ayipoyaaka andarilaage valliddaru boutikamga prapancham lone unna.. Valla feelings matram top of the world kii reach ayipoyayi..Strong bond..Maanasikamga, Saaririkamga…
Prati andamaina sayantram venuka bhayankaramaina cheekati untundannattu..oka roju Deepu ni pilichi, “Deepu, naaku ee vishayam elaa cheppalo kudaa teliyatledu. Manam pelli cheskovadam kudadaradu..Maa nanna aarogyam paadaipoyindi…Memu treatment kosam keralaki shift ayipotunnam, ee time lo nenu maa ammakii anda gaa undaali..Tarawata paristithulu baagayyaka chuddamani wait cheyinchi inkaa mana premaki ninnu baanisani cheyyadalachukoledu raa…Janmaniccharu kada raa vallu, valla runam teerchukodaaniki mana premani tyagam cheseddam raa..”
Deepu kii koddisepu emi ardam kaaledu..Tanu cheppina kaaranam loo nijaayitii undhi..Valliddari prema loo nijam undhi.. Ippudu Deepu ki rendu daarulunnayi.. Mondatidi tanakii ala avvadani cheppi brathimaalo bedirincho tanavallanunchi duram chesi valliddaru undadam…Rendodi tana prapanchanni tanaki icchesi, vaadi prapanchamaina tanaki shasvatam gaa duram avvadam…Kevalam rendu nimushalu aalochinchi Deepu rendo marganne enchukunnadu..
Divya nunchi duram ayina Deepu as usual ga chedu alavatlakii banisa ayipoyii..Oka roju oka katinamaina nirnayam teeskoni intiki velladu..
Correct gaa aalochiste, ikkada tappu preminchukunna rendu hrudayaladi kaadu, jabbuchesina valla nannadi kaadu..
Kaabatti all the girls over there..Please mark these following golden words :
Meeru mee intlo position ni manasulo pettukoni, ye abbayi meeda feelings ni penchukokandi.. Oka vela penchukunte aa abbayikante mundu aa vishayalanii parents ki cheppandi..Oka vela vallu oppukokapote, vallani edirinche dairyam kaani uddesam kaani paristiti kaani lenappudu, meeru aa abbayi manchi koretattlu ayitee vaadu enni sarlu propose chesinaaa reject cheseyyandi.. Vaadu temporary gaa badhapadina tarawata inko ammayini chuskuntaadu..Anthe gaani uncertain gaa okay cheppesi vaadi jeevithanni, mee jeevithanni spoil cheskokandi….
Tarawata Deepu paristithi gurinchi telusukovalantee “Jeevitham nerpina paataalu(Part-1)” nii chadavandii…Abbayilu meeku use ayye chala points anduloo unnayi..So don’t miss it…
